Editing (rewriting) a post for a flower shop
Text Editing & Proofreading
Improvement of the client's text for Instagram.
Was (problem): Rough tone, lack of structure, grammatical errors, aggressive sales ("buy, or you will be offended").
Became (result):
Changed Tone-of-Voice to friendly and engaging.
Corrected tautologies.
The text is structured into paragraphs for easy reading.
Was (problem): Rough tone, lack of structure, grammatical errors, aggressive sales ("buy, or you will be offended").
Became (result):
Changed Tone-of-Voice to friendly and engaging.
Corrected tautologies.
The text is structured into paragraphs for easy reading.