Editing an Instagram post.
Task: make the post more lively so that people want to read it.
Format: was-became.
Description of the service (psychologist)
Task: react to the text, make it more structured and client-oriented
Format: was-became.
Text editing.
Text Editing & Proofreading
The original text is a description of a cosmetics store.
Task: remove repetitions, improve readability.
Format: was - became