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so without further ado - an example of a rewrite by a freelancer lisica14:

so I sent the source (literally the beginning of the text):
"The installation of heated seats in our climatic conditions is becoming a necessity. Heated seats will make it easier to endure cold times and, moreover, will prevent the occurrence of a number of diseases."

got this rewrite:
"A necessity in climatic conditions is the installation of heated seats. Heating makes it easier to endure cold times and prevents a number of diseases."


sorry, but this is not a rewrite. the sentences are illogical, there are many mistakes. in general, an elementary rewrite and then performed poorly.
I do not recommend.