1 .The main page is not made of the word.There is a text that is taken from what I have provided as a basis for thought and there is a text that does not match the task, quality or is completely ignored.The example:
0) About us – made!(although I have corrected it)
a) “Problems he solves” – incorrectly
(b) the type of customer - for whom the product is not
b) No application
d) Call to action, the statement of the director (His experience, pain, decisions), - no
d) The description of the software without disclosure has not been made as necessary, as I said, for example - does not meet the request
The final call - No
2ndAbout us
a) The section "On Us" duplicates what should be on the main section
b) Mission is not thought, wiped, banal, not methodically
c) Vision - can be accepted by sub-correcting/supplementing
d) Banality - nothing is revealed from what is not considered in the task
a) A little translated text from the site
ThreeProducts
a) Not pages of products, description, services, cloud, etc.(b) There is a description of the quality software that leaves the best to be desired (in particular: there is no professionalism in the text that is generated and not taken from the site and refrared.4) Application for software (page) - it is not
5) Contact - lack of statements, addresses to the customer.The address of the tel and tp.The main problem is that the work was postponed for the last days by deadlines.There was no discussion and work on the sections as discussed.
There was an attempt to give up even something before the deadlines ended, which was not completely done.And in general, my time is broken and there is no time to replace for me.
0) About us – made!(although I have corrected it)
a) “Problems he solves” – incorrectly
(b) the type of customer - for whom the product is not
b) No application
d) Call to action, the statement of the director (His experience, pain, decisions), - no
d) The description of the software without disclosure has not been made as necessary, as I said, for example - does not meet the request
The final call - No
2ndAbout us
a) The section "On Us" duplicates what should be on the main section
b) Mission is not thought, wiped, banal, not methodically
c) Vision - can be accepted by sub-correcting/supplementing
d) Banality - nothing is revealed from what is not considered in the task
a) A little translated text from the site
ThreeProducts
a) Not pages of products, description, services, cloud, etc.(b) There is a description of the quality software that leaves the best to be desired (in particular: there is no professionalism in the text that is generated and not taken from the site and refrared.4) Application for software (page) - it is not
5) Contact - lack of statements, addresses to the customer.The address of the tel and tp.The main problem is that the work was postponed for the last days by deadlines.There was no discussion and work on the sections as discussed.
There was an attempt to give up even something before the deadlines ended, which was not completely done.And in general, my time is broken and there is no time to replace for me.
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