Save Victoria for admission to her creative masterpiece. Reading the book has become a discovery and revelation. How to carry out a life story, re-think, fill with heroes, feelings, events and write a whole novel? The task was concrete: to read, to look for shortcomings, weaknesses of the story, not very convincing actions. The editor is free. It was very pleasant that Victoria asked for a reasonable criticism and a detailed description of the heroes. The praise was for what.
The final discussion through the comments, in my opinion, became useful for both sides. If I was the editor, I took the book into the print. Victoria, I want not to stop, believe in myself, believe in what yours, your stories and a view of the world are needed!