Check the English text

Victoria with a small task.
In the end, there were a few comments at the first check of the result.
The notes were successfully corrected.
I recommend to Victoria (a) to qualitatively check out the result before delivery to the Customer - there are no logical misunderstandings, repetitions. (b) to clarify the necessary style of the text (as I found - where the original version was "personal to a particular person text-circulation" and the first result - "abstract text-circulation"

Overall, the final result was satisfied. thank you.

From the wishes to the customer... I would like to see more concrete clarity of the task setting. From the plus of cooperation, I can point out the fast payment and customer availability in communication. I will be glad for further cooperation.