Корректировка перевода в двух английских презентациях

Вам потрібна коректировка (редагування) англ. тексту чи переклад на англ. мову. В завданні Ви вимагаєте переклад на мову, а не коректировку. Якщо Вам потібно літературно перекласти те, що у Вас перекладено "топорно", то краще перекладати з нуля. Возитись з 2ма роботами складніше і не доцільно.

Mariya Sorokina 29 czerwca 2016

Спершу потрібне редагування. Якщо знайдемо професійного перекладача, то потім багато роботи треба переробити.

Если уж писать на украинском языке, неплохо было бы хорошо им владеть...Ну не существует слова "коректировка", не найдете такого нигде. "Коригуваня", ведь похоже на "редагування", да? Это именно оно.

Не благодарите.

Я використала слово, яке використував замовник. Не втручайтесь в чужу розмову.

Покажіть, будь ласка, рівень перекладу, який треба редагувати.

Mariya Sorokina 29 czerwca 2016

Зараз вишлю вам у ПП.

Most "warm in the world house.

As a result of work of command so high descriptions of dwelling building (operating prototype) were got, that to realize his complete noninteraction in the conditions of very cold climate it became maybe without application of the engineering systems of heating.For maintenance of overfall of temperatures inside-outside at home in forty degrees (for example, temperatures 20 degrees into a house at a frost 20 degrees outside) is an enough warmth of breathing of six persons.The change of form of any module at the mass automated production does not require additional expenses at a production, as a production of framework of the module is executed on technology of 3d-printing.A basic difference is unbelievable descriptions of heat-insulation and durability. Wall in 200мм thick is equivalent a brick - with a thickness 5,6м! (an option is possible - 7,33м)"

The warmest house in the world.The result was obtained so high performance residential building (working prototype) that to realize its full autonomy in a very cold climate made possible without the use of engineering systems of heating.To maintain the temperature difference inside and outside the house in forty degrees (for example, temperature 20 degrees inside the house when the frost is 20 degrees outside) — enough heat of respiration six.Change the shape of any module in serial and automated production does not require additional costs in manufacture, because the manufacture of the frame of the module is performed by the technology of 3D printing.The main difference is the incredible insulating characteristics and strength. The wall thickness of 200mm is equivalent to a brick with a thickness of 5.6 m! (optional - 7,33 m)

The warmest house in the world.

As a result of the brigade’s work so high characteristics of a residential building (working prototype) were obtained that it became possible to realize its full autonomy in a very cold climate without the use of engineering systems of heating.

To maintain the temperature difference in forty degrees inside and outside the house (for example, the temperature of 20 degrees inside the house when the frost is 20 degrees outside) the warmth of respiration of six people is enough.

The change of the shape of any module in serial automated production does not require additional costs in manufacture  as the manufacture of the module frame is performed by the 3D printing technology.

The main difference is the incredible insulating and strength characteristics. The wall with a thickness of 200mm is equivalent to the brick one with a thickness of 5.6 m! (optional - 7,33 m)

The warmest house in the world

In the wake of team’s work characteristics of the residential building (current prototype) were so high that it became possible to actualize its total autonomy in the context of low temperatures without engineer heating systems.

For keeping 40 degrees temperature difference inside and outside the house (for example +20^o inside the house with outside temperature -20^o)  it will be enough warmth of six people’ breathing.

Any module of commercial automated production form changing doesn’t involve additional expenses since for module frame producing 3D-printing technology is used.

The main difference is incredible characteristics of thermal isolation and durability. The wall 200 mm thick is equivalent to brick one - with thickness 5,6m! (7,33m is also possible)

As a result of a team work such high characteristics of a residential building (current prototype) were received that it became possible to realize its complete autonomy in a very cold climate without using engineering systems of heating.

The warmth of six people's breathing is enough to maintain a temperature differences inside and outside the house in 40 degrees (for example, the temperature inside the house is 20° with the frost of -20° outside of the house).

The changes of forms of any module in a serial automated production don't need any additional costs in production since the manufacturing of a framework module is made using 3D printing technology.

The main difference is incredible characteristics of thermal insulation and strength.

The 200mm thickness wall is equivalent to the brick one with a thickness of 5,6m! (optional - 7,33m)

Mariya Sorokina 15 lipca 2016

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