Marketing audit and directions in two landing pages on tourism

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The price is indicated, the result on your table for tomorrow's dinner.

Examples of sellers on landings will drop in the face.
I will be happy to help!

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Hello Alexey !I can help with the improvement of the landings, What's thrown into the eye - the lack of understanding from the first screen what you're offering.You need to make an offer and a descriptor.To improve the description, you will need information from you.In addition, the location and appearance of the text should be changed.Now it fuses and there are gross errors (for example, the depth should be written in the slide, in the fluid, not in the fluid, etc.)The price indicated for the work on both landings.Yes, I understand that they are about the same, so I think they should be done a little different to test the best option.I know that these trips will be repeated.PS: The price does not include posting the text on your website.No idea what the platform has there and what the possibilities it has.But I would like, of course, to place the text a little differently, not a practically smooth cubic...

PPS: with the selection of photos help.Better of course.They will look yours, not from the photo hosting, if they are quality and there are good pictures.PPPS: Sales scripts are not a problem either.But I would like to have a couple of conversations records and standard customer questions to work out all of this.I was selling on the phone and worked personally.I have always been selling the services.

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Good time of day. My name is Lira. I am pleased to take this job as the tourism sphere is my main specialization (big experience of working in the tourism company). For me it will be a combination of pleasant with useful. But as I noticed, the main requirement is to be in the country. I am a citizen of Kyrgyzstan and I live there. If this condition can be changed, I am to your services.
The sites are really very creative, bright. The description can be done. From the illustrations I would change the cover and small cards under it. There is a need for better quality photos.
My data in the profile.
with respect,
Lira

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