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Hello.

I am not an editor, publisher, or writer, but in my life I have read many novels, both by classic authors and just outright trash, which used to be called simply reading material on the internet :) I can describe myself as a demanding reader. I don't want to offend you, but you wanted an evaluation.
Here is a brief review.
1. You have a funny perception of the digital and analog worlds. Recommendation - improve your knowledge on this subject. Just your definition of "digital ghosts" is worth mentioning? I don't even know whether to cry, be perplexed, or laugh? I chose to laugh :)
2. Style? you simply don't have one. To read something like that, you really need to pay extra. I lost interest in reading already on the 5th page of your literary "work". I just couldn't understand what was bothering me so much? but then I understood. More details in paragraph 4.
3. A novel of 20 pages. Are you serious, or is this a joke?
4. Sequence of events. You already lack sequence and logic even in the sentences themselves. It feels like you forgot how to speak Russian. Recommendation - communicate more with native Russian speakers. Native Russian speakers don't speak or communicate the way you write.
5. With smells, feelings, numbers, and their definitions, it's a complete disaster. No offense, but some of your assessments made me laugh.
… 6. Grammatical errors and sentence structure, are a completely untouched field for an editor. :)


That's my current critical review.
It will be interesting, write if you want.

Good luck in literary creation.
With respect.

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Good day. I will gladly help you with the task. I will identify all the necessary points that require changes, provide an adequate assessment of the book, and give a detailed response regarding the overall impression.

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Good afternoon! Recently, you invited me to a personal project to edit this novel, but after receiving a free brief review of the text and the quoted cost of my work, I was informed that another editor is already working on the text. Perhaps this announcement was published by mistake (since, as I understand, another editor has long been working on the book). If, for some reason, you need an editor again, I can offer my services. As I mentioned in private correspondence, the volume of work is large. I provide a personalized approach to editing and creating texts. Additionally, the quoted cost of my work is based on the specific changes needed in your text. As before, I suggest starting with the development of chapters 1-8 of the first part of the novel.

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Good afternoon!

I am ready to perform the task of selecting 10 drop-domains for 301 redirects to your website — taking into account all requirements:
– Only available (non-auction) domains
– Age, relevance, clean history (no spam, casinos, NSFW)
– DR, TF, number and quality of backlinks
– Website archive check (Wayback Machine), themes, and linking mass

Using tools:
… – ExpiredDomains.net
– Ahrefs / SpamZilla / Majestic
– Google Ban check / Archive / Indexation

💡 I can select 1–2 test domains for free — to demonstrate the approach to the task.

I have experience in selection for SEO sandbox, PBN, and redirects. I work accurately, carefully, and quickly.

Ready to start immediately!

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Good evening. Your proposal caught my interest. I have experience in writing, editing, and proofreading texts. Recently: about 2 weeks ago, I did an editorial proofreading before printing the "Diary of Childhood" (psychology).
Therefore, I am ready to help you with this project. I guarantee seriousness, responsibility, and timely delivery.
If my candidacy as a performer interests you, I am ready to discuss all the details of our cooperation in private messages!
(Budget and deadlines can be discussed)
I look forward to working with you. Feel free to contact me.
Best regards, Olha Nikityuk!

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Good afternoon!
I will gladly read and evaluate your book. I will analyze it and suggest where you can add to it and what to change. Contact me, and we will discuss the details of the work.

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Hello) Ready to proofread your work. Contact me. Details in private messages

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Good day!
Ready to start cooperation!
Experience in similar projects - yes.
*details in private*

Attention!
If I indicated in the total rate "1111" or "777", it means I need more information to evaluate the project (also, deadlines may change depending on the scope).

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Hello! I am the person who can look at the text through the eyes of the future reader, and also possesses skills in structural editing and stylistic alignment. What I can do:
1. Book evaluation from the reader's perspective, which involves not only technical but also emotional, subjective analysis of text perception.

2. Checking the logical sequence of the narrative, searching for possible inconsistencies, repetitions, violations of causal relationships.

3. Identifying underdeveloped scenes or themes where it will be necessary to deepen the description or add nuances.

4. Analysis of the writing style, with possible recommendations for simplification, smoothing overloaded constructions, or stylistic mismatches.

… 5. Monitoring chronology and sequence of events to prevent confusion in time and locations.

6. Considering the potential to expand the text by 15-20%, which is important for creating a more voluminous and rich work.

If you need not just a "technical" proofreading, but in-depth content editing, including structural and artistic analysis - I am happy to collaborate!

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Good day, I have experience in implementing this task so I can assure you that I will perform this work accurately and qualitatively)

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Good afternoon. I am a co-author and editor of books for Amazon. I will gladly complete your task. I will prepare 2 files: one with answers to all questions about the plot, overall impression, character development, style, composition; and the second file - with the text itself and my comments on the text.

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Good afternoon! I would be happy to help you. I love and know how to create scripts for videos, poems, and fiction prose. I will gladly work on improving your text. We can discuss the details in private messages.

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Good afternoon! I am a philologist, I will read the book from the reader's perspective, take into account all the specified points, and provide feedback on time.

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Hello!
I will read the book
I will see if everything is logically structured, if there are no sagging parts or repetitions. I will pay attention to those moments that I want to "push through," because they lack depth or details.

If something can be written more simply — I will suggest. And overall regarding the structure: whether everything is in the correct sequence, whether something can be strengthened or expanded. + I will think about how to organically add volume so it doesn't look "stretched."

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