Check the sales text for the landing page written by AI
🧾 Technical Task: Review of the landing page text "Divorce through court turnkey"
🎯 Purpose of the review
Check the landing page text for compliance with selling requirements, perception logic, structure, and persuasiveness. Prepare recommendations for improvement if necessary.
📌 What needs to be checked:
1. Key message (Block 1)
Is the unique selling proposition clearly conveyed?
Is the 4U formula (Unique, Useful, Concrete, Urgent) used?
Does the subheading and benefits meet the target audience's expectations?
How effective is the CTA (call to action to take the quiz in Telegram)?
2. Offer and scenario (Block 2)
Is the scheme of work clear?
Is there a clear explanation of why divorce is safe and stress-free?
Is there enough detail in the steps?
3. Objection handling (Block 3)
Are real fears of the target audience addressed?
Is the tone appropriate — not too "dry" or overly "pressuring"?
Does the CTA fit the context?
4. Answers to questions (Block 4)
Are there real, specific questions from the target audience?
Do they duplicate objections?
Is the structure convenient for perception?
5. Case studies and reviews (Blocks 5–6)
Is the case study lively and emotional enough?
Are the reviews credible?
Does it generate trust?
6. Lawyer (Block 7)
Is there enough weight and expertise?
Does it create a feeling of personal support?
Does the CTA block support actions?
7. Pricing (Block 8)
Is it clearly explained what the client pays for?
Is there an emphasis on value rather than just price?
Is the structure and presentation of packages logical?
8. General criteria
Logic: smooth transition between blocks
Style: compliance with tone of voice from the guide
Length: not overloaded, no repetitions?
Language: light, understandable, without unnecessary legalese
CTA: are there actions in each key block?
📎 Format of the result
Separate list of recommendations on structure, style, meaning
Comments within the text
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TN2TrLJOxCFgy_TR5132HAzXrWr3nlR39n1RS8osclQ/edit?tab=t.0
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217 Hello! I would like to work with you, interesting task. The main thing is that the topic is relevant.
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1480 97 3 6 Hello, Nikolay. The task is not the easiest, but very interesting. I have been working with neural networks for a long time – and I understand them better every day.
Feel free to contact me, I will be glad to work with you.
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238 Good afternoon!
I will gladly help improve your sales landing page. I can take your text, carefully read it, and:
Check if the headline is engaging — does it reflect the problem, benefit, intrigue?
Evaluate the coherence of the structure: is it easy for the reader to understand what to do next?
Identify where benefits can be strengthened, calls to action added, and unnecessary "water" removed.
… Refine the style, eliminate grammatical errors, and increase trust.
Provide specific suggestions — not just criticism, but ready-made formulations.
Regarding cost, I estimate around ~300–400 UAH for a full analysis + revisions (blocks by agreement).
I am ready to deliver the result within a day after approval.
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6066 323 0 4 Good afternoon!
I regularly work with AI and know all the nuances of creating selling texts with the help of artificial intelligence.
I will check your text according to all your criteria.
I will do it quickly and efficiently.
Feel free to contact me!
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965 6 0 Hello, I reviewed your text — I see many moments where it's obvious that AI is used, and I understand what your audience might specifically dislike. I have been working as a copywriter for over 9 years, I know how to create landing pages and sales texts, so I can give specific comments and recommendations. Write to me, I will be glad to cooperate.
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1847 46 5 Good day!
I have over 5 years of experience in proofreading, editing, and writing SEO, sales, and informational texts in English, German, and Ukrainian.
Examples of texts and reviews are in the Profile.
I suggest discussing the project details in Personal Messages.
Write to me! I will be happy to help!
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1546 11 0 2 Hello! I will quickly and efficiently do the analysis!
I will write all the recommendations according to your template.
Feel free to contact me.
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511 1 0 Legal copywriter: I work a lot with texts about legal services, and in the past I traded them myself)
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423 9 0 Experience as a copywriter - 10 years. Also have experience in testing and editing.
I will take on your work and identify all possible inaccuracies/discrepancies/errors, check for user-friendliness, and provide quality feedback.
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18934 536 2 3 Good day!
We are the team of copywriters at Flashorder. We create high-quality, unique content in Ukrainian, Russian, English, and other languages.
Our services:
• Texts for websites, blogs, social media
• SEO optimization
• Advertising texts, product descriptions, articles
• Content adaptation for different markets
…
We work quickly, responsibly, and with love for words. Ready to discuss details!
Best regards,
The Flashorder team
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288 Hello! 😊
Thank you for the clear technical assignment — I have already reviewed the document and am starting work.
I have experience editing texts for landing pages, especially in sales and quizzes. I know how to strengthen the unique selling proposition, remove "water" and make the text lively and convincing. ✍️
I will prepare a list of recommendations + comments directly in the text. I will send feedback soon! 🔥
Ready to collaborate 😉 If you want, I can also adjust the style!
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1108 50 0 Hello, Mykola!
I have repeatedly done AI rewriters of texts. Therefore, I know that it can repeat.
I will review your text and provide written recommendations.
Please send me a private message to clarify the details of the collaboration.
Some of my works can be viewed here:
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10952 740 0 Good day, I am interested in your project.
⚡Familiarized myself with the text. I have ideas and suggestions. I do not fundamentally use AI. I am ready to perform exactly according to your requirements.
🤓Editor by profession. I have knowledge of Russian and Ukrainian at a professional level, skills, experience in writing SEO texts, a desire to work!
Total work experience with texts - 20 years:
editorial experience in print media - 8 years (7 years as the executive editor of the medical magazine "Zdorovo" and its supplements "Zdorovo be mom" and "Zdorovo grow healthy" - from 2007 to 2013), in copywriting - 13 years (since early 2012).
❗ ❗❗I cooperate with clients exclusively through Safe.
🤝 Feel free to contact me. I will be glad to work with you.
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678 6 0 I am an SEO specialist, conducting comprehensive website audits, including analysis of texts, structure, and usability.
I check how well the content meets audience expectations and contributes to conversions.
In such tasks:
- I evaluate the quality of Unique Selling Propositions (USP) and the effectiveness of calls to action,
- I check the logic of the landing page structure and layout,
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- I ensure that the style and presentation are clear, convincing, and match the specific topic,
- I provide a detailed report with justified recommendations and comments directly in the text.
Please clarify whether you already have a ready-made target audience profile or if it needs to be defined additionally?
I am ready to discuss collaboration details!
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5211 58 0 Hello, Nikolay!
I have free time until the end of the day. I am ready to complete the work within two hours after the order is assigned to me.
Why so fast? Landing pages are over 10 years old, and I don't need to pull recommendations out of thin air. I immediately see what is wrong and write or voice specific recommendations with explanations.
I propose the following work format. You give me the order. After that, I have the right, according to system rules, to send you a link to an online call. As soon as I prepare my recommendations in writing so you can continue to use them, we will have a call.
And I briefly, clearly, and to the point explain what can be fixed and how to do it, and what can be left as is because it is well written. We will go through each letter and refine the text to an ideal result.
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Feel free to contact me, I am available and ready to discuss the project right now!
Best regards,
Dmitry
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1609 40 1 1 I have been engaged in copywriting for over three years and during this time I have written more than 300 texts on various topics in Ukrainian, English, German, and Russian. My knowledge of English and German corresponds to level B2.
I am fluent in using various writing styles and possess skills in prompt engineering, SEO, and LSI copywriting. My arsenal includes creating texts of different formats, such as articles, posts, reviews, letters, news, advertising texts, landing pages, sales materials, informational materials, comments, reviews, translations, rewriting, and editing.
I actively use services such as text.ru, advego, grammarly, content-watch, istio, GPT 3 content detector, synonymizer, text 1 com, Google Docs, Excel, Canva, Copyscape, ChatGPT, copy.ai, Word, etxt, content-outline builder, pr-cy.
I also compose meta-tags, including Title and Description. Overall, my texts are characterized by conciseness, structure, and attractiveness. I can quickly find and process information, and I write competently and clearly.
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273 1 0 Good day! I offer my proofreading services. The task is clear. I will proofread quickly and efficiently. I ask for 600 UAH for the work. I look forward to cooperating!
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358 5 0 Hello!
I am ready to conduct a thorough audit of your landing page text, taking into account all specified criteria: from unique selling proposition to tone, block logic, and CTA persuasiveness. My experience is over 6 years in copywriting, UX texts, and the structure of sales pages.
🔍 What I will do:
Analyze each block according to the Terms of Reference (1–8)
Check transition logic, integrity, readability
… Evaluate offer presentation, objection handling, case, tariffs
Provide recommendations on structure, style, persuasiveness
Indicate where the text "hangs," loses trust, or is overloaded
Leave comments within the text and generate a list of improvements
📎 Format: Word/Google Docs document + checklist + conclusions
My goal is not just to "mark errors," but to make your landing page start converting better while preserving tone and uniqueness.
I am ready to start immediately after approval.
Best regards,
Oleksandr Laskavy
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