Правка текста на английском языке

Нужно редактировать текста и получить хорошую грэму и может где-то изменить слова.

Очень много текста здесь повторяется.

Стилистика - деловая. Настоение дружелюбное, явное желание помочь.

Думаю работа на час-два времение.

Это шаблоны сообщений, которые я допиливаю для каждого моего клиента.

111- заменяю на имя.

Мы пишем масляные портреты на холсте на заказ. 100% ручная работа

Описание лота:

You can order any size you want.

Why do you need a frame for a painting?
The frame for the painting separates the world that is in the painting from the general interior.
And painting in a frame is a kind of portal to another reality, where there is some kind of life and harmony.
The frame separates this world from your interior.

When choosing a frame you need to remember that:

- She steals up to the painting, not to the interior;

- The image and the frame should not compete, but be integrated, successfully complementing each other;

- Dark frames are chosen for dark masterpieces, sunny and bright for light ones, although there may be rare exceptions; Thus, gold frames are considered universal and suitable for almost any paintings;

- Dark frames "move" the painting deep into, and light - bring it closer;

- Wide frames are suitable for large paintings, and narrow frames for small ones; moreover, massive frames add luxury, significance, and solidity to the product;

- Modern abstract works need strict frames, and landscapes and still lifes - in a classic frame.

If you still have some questions, I will be hapy to answer them.
Send me a message.
Thank you a lot.

ПРОСЧЕТ РАБОТЫ

Hi, 11111.

I will be happy to make this 100% handmade oil painting on canvas from this photo!

You will have an awesome painting!

111111, here are a few options for your painting with 2 figures:

1)12" x 16"/ 30 x 40cm - ... USD
2)16" x 20"/ 40 x 50cm - ... USD
3)20" x 24"/ 50 x 60cm -... USD

4) 24" x 28"/ 60 x 70cm -... USD

The painting will be ready to hang on a wall!

The price includes shipping.

All sizes are good for your painting!

If you ready to start creating the painting the next step will be purchasing an item I will create for you.

You can pay 50% before the process and the other 50% when the painting will be ready or you can pay now100%.

Would you like to pay 50% now or 100%?

What do you think about the size?

Thank you for cooperation.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Когда клиент соглашается на отплату в 50процентов

Hi 111.

Super!

You will be happy with the painting!

111, here is the item when you will find the payment option “For 111”:

111, This is 50% of your price.

Use only PayPal, please.

Soon you will get the photo of the painting process.

Thank you a lot.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Когда высылаем процесс (30% готовности работы) работы (почему покупает):

Hi 1111

Here is the photo of the painting process.

Do you love it?

111, I want to understand why people order paintings and make a better service.

111, could you answer a few questions. I will be veeery grateful for you 😉

1)Your age.

2)A few of your hobbies (music, wine, etc.)

3)What doubts were before buying in my store?

4)For whom did you get the painting?

5)Who is painted in the painting?

6)For what holiday created the painting?

7)Why did you order the painting and not another gift?

8)Why did you decide to order the painting in my shop?

I will be so grateful for you if you answer these questions.

Thank you a lot.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Когда высылаем процесс работы (дискрипшен):

Hi 1111

Here is the photo of the painting process.

Do you love it?

111, I want to understand why people order paintings and make a better service.

111, could you answer a few questions. I will be veeery grateful for you 😉

1) What was important for you when choosing an artist (put a mark in front of each of the terms, 1- is completely irrelevant, 5- is very important):

a) 100% handmade guarantee.

b) Sending photos of the process.

c) The painting is signed by the artist.

d) The painting is stretched (ready to hang on a wall).

e) Information on how the order process.

f) Time of the creation.

g) The ability to combine photos and change specific parts of the painting

j) The ability to pay 50% as deposit

2) Was the description clear for you?

3) Did you have some questions after reading the description? Which questions?

4) Do you like the banner of my shop?

I will be so grateful for you if you answer these questions.

Thank you a lot.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Когда картина уже готова (Продаем багет):

Hi 111.

Your painting is ready😃😃😃!

Do you love it?

If yes, buy this item as the second part of the payment:

link

There you will find the payment option: “For 111”

111, Do you like the frame for your painting you see in the interior?

You can get the painting with this frame

The price for the frame is ...USD.

Here you can see all examples of frames I selected for paintings.

You can choose up to 3 frames and I will make visualization of the painting in these frames in the interior.

What do you think about the frame?

Thank you a lot.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Когда клиент отказал или согласился приобрести раму:

I understand you, 111

Anyway, the painting will be ready to hang on a wall too.

111, please, write me the right address for shipping plus add your MOBILE PHONE NUMBER (this increases the chances that delivery will be smooth up to 99%)

I will send the painting in a few days and I will writre you when the painting will be in your post office.

Thank you so much.

Sincerley Aleksandr.

Или

Super!

Here are a few options for your painting:

1)Visualizasion #1 - ...USD

2)Visualizasion #2 - ...USD

3)Visualizasion #3 - ...USD

Which one do you like more?

Thank you.

Когда картина была отправлена:

Hi 1111.

Here is your tracking number:

111, I will let you know when the painting will be in your city!

If you are interested, here are my page in social networks:

Facebook: 

Instagram: 

Thank you a lot.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Просьба оставить отзыв 

Hi 1111, I hope you saw the painting and you are happy with the results.

1111,  Could you help me, please.

A lot of people don’t understand that on Etsy exists a lot of shops who print photos on canvas and after they add acrylic paint, telling customers that this is "handmade oil painting".

I think you understand that and that why you have chosen me.

1111, please, write a feedback about why you decided to buy the real painting (I am sure that you have seen cheaper prices on Etsy.)

Please write about what you feel when you got real oil painting from me, which energetic you feel from the painting which was created by the hands of a human, not printed by machine.

You will help my little business, you will help other people to don't buy fake art, and support the real artist.

1111 if you can do it, I will be so happy, it is so important for me and for many artists)

Here are the steps on how to do it:

1) Go to www.etsy.com/your/purchases

2) You will see an option to write me feedback.

Hope to get it.

Thank you for your help)

Sincerely Alexander.

Просьба оставить отзыв 

Hi 1111, I hope you got the painting and you are happy with the results.
11111, PLEASE HELP ME...
Could you give me good feedback, please?
It will really help my little business...
Tell my future customers that they can trust me)

If yes, if you can do it, I will be so happy, it is so important for me)

Here are the steps on how to do it:
1) Go to www.etsy.com/your/purchases
2) You will see an option to write me feedback.
Hope to get it.
Thank you for your help)
Sincerely Alexander.

Запрос на большую картину или маленький размер:

Hi 12121.

Thank you so much.

Look, the minimum size for your painting is 24" x 28"/ 60 x 70cm.

I create handmade art and I need a space to create all detailed faces, and parts as nose, ears, eyes should be created not by one touch of the brush. The printer can do it in the little area because it works with pixels, artist work with a brush.

If you find some artist how will create this painting on a little size about 16' x 20' asked him about photos of the process of creation, probably it will be printing.

112121, I also suggest cropping the photo to bring more space for your faces.

I add the photo.

1111112, here are a few options for your painting (include shipping) :

1)24" x 28"/ 60 x 70cm - ... USD

2)28" x 35"/ 70 x 90cm - ... USD

3)32" x 39"/80 x 100cm -... USD

The painting will be ready to hang on a wall!

Here is the formula how I count the price:

Addition person in the painting is 50USD x 6= 300 +the size.

The best option is second or the third one because this size will give an opportunity to draw all details.

If you ready to start creating the painting the next step will be purchasing an item.

You can pay 50% before the process and other 50% when the painting will be ready or you can pay now100%.

Which kind of payment would you like to use?

What do you think about the size?

Thank you for cooperation.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Эксперимент:

Dear Josh here is important information for you.

There are not a lot of shops on Etsy where artists create 100% handmade paintings.

There are a lot of fake handmade paintings, people print images on canvas and add a little bit of oil in some places to imitate texture.

They call it 100%handmade painting.

Their price begins from 135USD and they cannot send photos of the process and they don't care how many people they will print.

They don't charge additional money for them.

If you work with me you will get 100% handmade painting by oil on canvas and I will send you photos of the process.

I think you understand what difference between a print and a real art.

Be careful with it.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Выставление счета

Hi 111.

Here is your item:

11111

You will find there your option for payment “For 1111”

In a few days, I will start to create your painting and will send you photos of the process of the creation.

You will be more than happy!!!

Than you a lot.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

МОЛЧАЛИВЫЕ 1

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Hi, 1111.

I didn't get a reply from you.

Let me know, do you still want to get the painting from me?

I have a few conversations about portraits and I want to understand, will we make your painting?

Thank you for your reply.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

МОЛЧАЛИВЫЕ 2

Hi, 11111.
I didn't get a reply from you.
111, probably you found a cheaper price, ask an artist about providing photos of the process. If they cannot give you these photos (I add the example), they print images on canvas.
Will we create 100% handmade oil painting for you?
Thank you for your reply.
Sincerely Aleksandr.

МОЛЧАЛИВЫЕ 3

Hello 11111

I still didn't get the message from you.

Do you still want to get the painting by me?

If no, please let me understand why, it will help me.

Can I improve the terms of our cooperation which will allow us to create the portrait for you?

What do you think?

Thank you for your reply and understanding. 

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Плохое качество фотографии.

Hi Lauren

I will be happy to create this painting, but...

Lauren, unfortunately, the quality of the photo is to bad for the painting.

It will be not a realistic face on the painting.

I cannot see details.

Do you have the photo with better quality?

Thank you.

Sincerely Aleksandr.

• Только что купили И НЕ ВЫСЛАЛИ ИНФУ

Hi 1111!
My name is Aleksandr and I will be happy to make the painting for you.
Please send me all information and ideas about your painting.
Send me the photo you would like to turn into art.
Thank you a lot!
You will be more than happy with the results!!!
Sincerely Aleksandr.

Работа с ушедшими ИЗ-ЗА ЦЕНЫ

Hi 1111111. I see you don't like some terms, maybe this is the price, and I understand you, the price is high, as the quality.
I really want to make your painting.
11111, will we make the painting for you, if I give you next prices for painting (the price include shipping on the wood subframe):
1)12" x 16"/ 30 x 40cm - ... usd
2)16" x 20"/ 40 x 50cm - ... usd
3)20" x 24"/ 50 x 60cm - ... usd
What do you think?
Thank you for reply.
Sincerely Aleksandr.

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Работа с ушедшими отложившими картину

Hello 111111! I remember that you would like to make the painting!

Tell me please, do you still want to get the painting by our team?

If yes, I would be happy to make it for you.

What do you think?

Ready to start the conversation?

Thank you!

Вопрос на то, чтобы напомнить через год на эту же дату

Hi 11111

11111, I apologize that I could not create the painting for you up to your 11111.

111111, I thought that you might like the idea of reminding you about this painting next year.

Maybe do you have a loved people to whom you would like to make a gift in the form of a oil painting?

I will write you in advance and you can decide whether it is interesting for you.

Can I write you in the next year for the same holiday or maybe before another holiday?

Thank you a lot!

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Когда отправил картину

Hi, 111. I sent the painting today. Here is the track number  11111

I will write to you when the painting will be in your post office.

Hope to get nice feedback from you)

Thank you!

Sincerely Aleksandr.

Когда картина в городе

Hi, 111.

I hope this email finds you well

111, your painting arrived at your post office 😃😃😃!

Here is your track number:

111, when you will get the painting, please let me know that you are happy with the results)

If you are happy, could you help my future customers to understand that I am a good seller and they can work and trust with me)

If yes, I will be so happy, it is so important for me)

Here are the steps on how to do it:

1)    Go to https://www.etsy.com/your/purchases

2)    You will see an option to write me feedback.

Hope to get it.

Thank you for your help and cooperation)

Sincerely Alexander.

Тем, кото говорил о следующем заказе

Последнее сообщение об отзыве

Hi 111

I hope you got the painting and you happy with the results.

1111 I have a discount program for my customers when you, me and my future customers will win.

1) You will leave the feedback about your experience working with me.

2) You will get the discount ...USD for the next painting in my shop!

3) If you recommend my shop to your friends and they will order the painting you will get +20USD

4) Totally you will get ...USD + other ...USD (according to new customers from you)

I hope you will take a part in this program. You will earn good discount and help other people.

I will be really grateful for you.

If you write it do next:

• <!--[if !supportLists]-->Go to https://www.etsy.com/your/purchases
• <!--[if !supportLists]-->You will see an option to write me feedback.

Hope to get it.

Thank you for your help and business)

Sincerely Alexander.

Описанеи лота:

You will see photos during the painting process (30%, 70%, 100% of completed)- proof that you will get 100% handmade oil portrait on canvas!
If you want you will get a similar video of the painting process (for free) let me know:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G13kl3s2C9U

Click "Send a message" add a photo (or a few photos), including your idea of a perfect portrait.
You will get a few options with sizes and prices and my comments. Or use email:★ [email protected] ★

If you need express shipping (you will get a painting in 17 days from the moment of order) write to me first.

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Benefits of working with me:

- You will see photos of the painting process - the proof of that you will get real art, NOT PRINTED PHOTO on canvas with added acrylic paint in some places. (printing on canvas cost from 100usd on Etsy)

- You can only pay 50% of the price as the deposit, and the rest when you are happy with the result.

- The oil painting will be READY TO HANG ON A WALL!!!

- Express shipping if you need it.

- I can change some parts of the feature (e.g. face, hair, etc.).

- I can combine several photos into one painting.

- You can buy an additional frame to a painting.
(when a painting will be ready, you will get a few visualizations of painting in different frames)

- Painting includes the signature of the artist.

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How it works:
1)Contact me by Etsy or by email ★ [email protected] ★
2)Send a photo (or a few photos), including your idea of a perfect portrait.
3)Taking into account all your ideas and wishes, we will then discuss the size of the painting, price, and time of creation.
4)You can pay 50% of the price and I will start to send you photos of the painting process.
5)The painting will be ready during 5-10 days after you buy the item.
6)When you will be happy with the results, you will send the second part of the payment and I will send you the painting.
7)You will get the painting in 30-35 days.
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If you have any questions, please read the FAQs at the bottom of the site or send me a message, I will be happy to answer all your questions.

Thank you that you help us to bring more art into this world)
Sincerely Aleksandr.