Adaptation of the work for stage performance
Adaptation of B. Antonenko-Davydovych's "Word of the Mother" for the Stage
It is necessary to rewrite the work for stage performance (minimize the author's words, convert everything into dialogues, etc.) The original work contains 33 pages. Naturally, most of it needs to be omitted (framing, the part where urban life is described...) Ideally, it should result in a 20-40 minute performance with a minimal number of scene changes.
1. General Information
Source Material: The story of Borys Antonenko-Davydovych "Word of the Mother".
Goal: Creation of a full-fledged dramatic text (play or script) for a theatrical production.
Genre of Adaptation: Psychological drama with elements of tragedy.
Target Audience: General public, youth, researchers of Ukrainian literature and history.
2. Ideological and Thematic Direction
The adaptation should preserve and enhance the key themes of the original source:
Conflict of ideology and family ties.
The sacred role of the mother as the guardian of language and memory.
The tragedy of the "lost generation" that betrayed its roots for false ideals.
The language issue as a marker of identity and humanity.
3. Requirements for Structure and Content
3.1. Dramatic Composition
The text should be divided into scenes (approximately 3-5 scenes) that sequentially reveal the exposition, rising action, climax, and resolution.
Dialogues: Should be concise. It is necessary to preserve the authentic lexicon of Antonenko-Davydovych.
Stage Directions: Should include descriptions of the psychological state of the characters (pauses, gestures, changes in intonation).
The work is not complete. Some parts will need to be omitted. Focus on the mother's deathbed will and the climactic "break" with new acquaintances.
Applications 1
Client's review of cooperation with Yurii Yemchytsky
Adaptation of the work for stage performanceThe work was done at a high level. All wishes were taken into account, creativity was added, and interesting solutions were provided for moments that would have been difficult to execute based on the original work. Yuriy is a true professional, so I recommend him as a responsible author who pays attention to detail and thinks outside the box. Thank you for the collaboration.
Freelancer's review of cooperation with Bohdan Belmeha
Adaptation of the work for stage performanceI recommend Bohdan as a client! He clearly formulated the task, responded promptly to questions, and constructively discussed project details. It was comfortable to work — without unnecessary edits "on the go" and a clear understanding of the final result. Bohdan is a person who knows what he wants and respects the executor's time.
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3190 171 0 Hello!
I write plays. I have experience in writing adaptations of children's works: https://ukrdramahub.org.ua/play/odnoho-razu-na-rizdvo
It would be interesting to work on an adaptation of Antonenko-Davydovych's story, we can discuss it.
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303 Hello! I am ready to take on the adaptation of the text for the play.
I clearly understand the task:
Minimum words from the author: I will translate all the text into action and lively dialogues.
Structure: I will discard everything unnecessary (urban life, descriptions), leaving only the essence and conflict for a scene lasting 20-40 minutes.
Format: I will format it as a professional script (lines, stage directions, actions).
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I have a good sense of rhythm and style, so the text will sound organic from the stage, not "bookish."
I am ready to do a test fragment (one scene) for free, so you can see my approach. I look forward to your response!
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1953 33 0 Hello, Bohdan!
Thank you for the detailed brief — the task is clear and interesting.
I have experience in literary editing and dramatic adaptation of texts, particularly working with prose, where it is important to preserve the author's vocabulary, psychological tension, and the ideological integrity of the original source. I understand the specifics of transforming prose text into stage material: minimizing the author's exposition, dialogization, clear composition of scenes, working with pauses and the internal conflict of characters.
I propose the following work format:
analytical processing of the original with selection of key scenes and meaningful nodes;
building a dramatic structure (3–5 scenes) with a logical arc;
translating the text into dialogues while preserving the authentic language of Antonenko-Davydovych;
notes focusing on the psychological state of the characters;
1 round of edits based on feedback.
… To accurately determine the scope, deadlines, and cost, I would like to clarify a few points:
1️⃣ Time reference — closer to 20 or 40 minutes?
2️⃣ Format of the performance: reading / chamber scene / full production?
3️⃣ How many actors are expected and are monologues allowed?
4️⃣ Has the issue of rights for the stage adaptation of the work been agreed upon?
5️⃣ Is adaptation needed for a specific theater / directorial vision?
After clarifying these details, I will gladly propose specific deadlines and final costs. I am ready to join the work.
Best regards, Yuriy
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1726 38 0 I am Maria, a screenwriter for popular reality shows on TV, currently an author, screenwriter, and producer of various videos for YouTube, TikTok, and Instagram for clients in different fields. I have a theater education, so I know how plays should look for staging. My portfolio and detailed resume are available on the website here. I am ready to take on your work.
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