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Good day, Ilya. I read a fragment of your book and I can say that there is a lot of work to be done here. There are unsuccessful phrases, Russisms, tautologies, and many punctuation mistakes. "Then the eyes went down" - that is a lexical mistake. It's not eyes, but gaze. "Lied face down to the ceiling" - in Ukrainian, they say "lied on her back." There are quite a few such things. And there are factual errors, for example, with migraines, the headache is unilateral, meaning it does not pulse in both temples. A certain specific part of the head hurts. In short, as an experienced editor (with over 20 years in the profession), I can turn your text into a gem. I have loved fantasy since my youth. Shall we work together?