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I come from Ukraine. 5 months ago, I received an engineering degree from Czestochowa University of Technology in Poland, majoring in energy engineering.

  I am sure that the future belongs to renewable energy sources and the possibility of doing internship in Germany interested me very much, because in Germany renewable energy is much better developed than in Poland.

Even while studying at school, I was interested in foreign languages, exactly then that I began to pay attention to the German language. Also, my love to the foreign languages helped me quickly to learn Polish, now I set a goal to learn German and even created a small Telegram-channel, where I and several thousand people with interest, together learn German.

Since childhood, I was attracted by the profession of engineer, that's why I graduated from the University of Technology, I am sure that my professional career is related to engineering, but I have not yet fully decided in what field, because while studying at the Hochschule Ravensburg-Weingarten in the third year I was interested in 2D and 3D design (I even passed the test for a certificate from the AutoCAD).

My first experience as an energy engineer was at the Fortum thermal power plant. That's when I realized that renewable energy was the future.

My first job as an engineer was at Green Fox. There I was engaged in drawing 3D details in the Solidworks program. Also, there I got theoretical and practical knowledge in the field of lighting for growing plants.

These two events gave me an idea of what I want to do in the future.

  I am a purposeful person who is always open to new knowledge and experience. In addition, I am characterized by responsibility and team spirit. I have a great desire to expand my professional qualities and level of knowledge of the German language. Therefore, I see the opportunity to practice at Hochschule Nordhausen as the next stage of my training as an engineer. This opportunity would allow me to gain important experience for my future professional activities and personal development.

I would be very happy to receive a positive response from you and, of course, ready to answer Your questions at any time.